Recount Writing-Having a swim.

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.

On the weekend I went to the creek. 

I went with my mum to have a swim.

First, I swam under the tunnel. 

I felt good.

Next, I saw how long I could stay under the water. 

After that, my mum hopped in.

Then my dad came. Finally, I hopped out.
This is the published copy of my writing