My Writing Sample-Term 1 2021

 Horses riding.

On Sunday afternoon me and my family. First we took the  horse to the beach. The horses loved the beach. The one I was riding jumped in the air. I had fun on the horses After that Dad and I went to get some hot chips and drinks. We waited for the hot chips. We went back and then us kids had a swim in water. When I got out of the water the chips and drinks were ready to eat when we were done there were no more to eat it was yummy  then a dog chase us we got in the car we then we realised they were not after us they were after  horse we saved them later on we went home  Finally  

Ideas	I have many ideas on the topic with little information
Structure Language	I can use some of the correct pats/structure for my writing AND I Can use some of the right words for the type of writing.
Organistion	I try to put my ideas in order.
Vocabulary	I can write lot of simple words and some extra words to add detail.
Sentence Structure	I am beginning to  write sentences of different lengths I am beginning to use different types of sentences.
Punctuation	I sometimes use capital letters and full stop in the correctly. I use some other punctuation correctly.
Spelling	I can spell a few words correctly. I write down the sounds I hear in a word

Here is my Writing sample for Trem l 2021  I think my writing has improved I can put my idea   in order.