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Camping

On Sunday me and my family went camping. As soon as we got there my dad and my brother ran down to the beach.

 

My mum set up the kitchen while me and my sisterś set up the camp.  It started to get dark.

My dad came back with five fish. He caught two fish and my brother caught three fish. My mum put them on the smoker for 20 minutes. The fish was cooked. We had one fish suddenly a bunch off mosquitoes came. We ran in the tents. The boys were in one tent and the girls were in the other tent. The mosquitoes surrounded the tent then lots of wind came from over the hills. Then all the mosquitoes were swept away. When we went out the smoker was tipped over. My brother walked over to the smoker and picked it up. Then my mum went into her tent and came out with marshmallows. Next she made a small fire and we went to get some sticks and came back and put them in the fire. We were lucky because there were six little sticks. We put our marshmallows on the sticks and on the fire we waited for a couple of minutes and then our marshmallows were very nicely toasted.They were yum.

It was a very cool time with our whanau. I really enjoyed it.