Recount Writing-Going Fishing

I am learning to write interesting stories for my reader.
Going fishing 
On Saturday me and my family went to Kaitaia to go fishing at Ninety Mile beach. 
First we looked for the right spot to go fishing.
My dad found some flat rocks right by the water.
We took all of our fishing gear down to the rocks and set up our fishing spot.
I got out my rod and  I put some bait on my hook. 
Next I cast out my fishing line.
I was waiting patiently for a fish to bite my bait.
I waited and I waited.
Suddenly there was a bite. I felt excited. I pulled the rod in.
I pulled in a big snapper.  ¨Whoa!¨ I shouted. ¨Come and help me!¨  My dad ran over and helped me pull it in. I felt very excited.
It was amazing to catch a big snapper.SPLASH!! CRASH!! 
After that we put the snapper in the chilly bin then we went home. I had an amazing day.