Recount Writing-On Saturday

On Saturday                  

On Saturday afternoon I went to Kaitaia to see my nephew and my sister. My brother and my mum came too.

First we went to the park.  I went with my mum and brother and I played on the flying fox. I was going spa fast but going leow i was happy 

Next we went to the bakery it was so delish i had panke with  cream and jam 

After that we ride to my Nanś house. We watched tv 

with my brother and with my mum.  We got some popcorn. I said it was YUM! and buttery.

We were learning about...Recounts.

I found it easy to...show my Readers.

I found it hard to...Writing  juicy words.

I really enjoyed...writing about what I did.                   

Next time I need to...put in more juicy words.